We have critique group available.
The first is the General Critique Circle
An ad hoc Group which meets according to demand of material sent in.
looking at work in early draft stage
up to something close to last draft.
Meanwhile members may still wish to look at the following two classic short stories.
The Short Happy Life of Frances Macomber (Hemingway)
Three Fat Women of Antibes (Maughm)
A pdf for Macomber is: http://www.standardsinstitutes.org/sites/default/f...http://www.thisisaprivatesale.com/downloads/maughamshortstories.pdf
And here is a treat. On this link where the old man himself reads the story, click on the picture. The first few minutes is music and a listing of his work. You can move the scroll bar to skip. Double clicking on the picture should enlarge it so that you can read the story as you listen: